Changes between Version 3 and Version 4 of En:Descripcion

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Mar 1, 2012, 12:52:36 PM (13 years ago)

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paqui

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En:Descripcion

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 = Project Description =
 
-!OpenGnSys (''Open Genesis'') is based on a modular architecture separated in different service layers which allows its implementation in several educational and organizational IT environments, both in a centralized or distributed way. The main system management is carried out by means of a simple web interface which supports delegated administration. !OpenGnSys is also suitable for isolated environments, being able to work under network failure conditions (''offline'' mode). 
+!OpenGnSys (''Open Genesis'') is based on a modular architecture separated into different service layers which allows its implementation in several educational and organizational IT environments, both in a centralized or distributed way. The main management of the system is carried out by means of a simple web interface which supports delegated administration. !OpenGnSys is also suitable for isolated environments, being able to work in network failure conditions (''offline'' mode). 
 
 == Architecture ==
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  * The bottom layer is responsible for direct access to client devices and motor functions of cloning.
  * An intermediate layer consisting of a set of tools to perform complex tasks and environment customization.
- * Management module consists of a simple and intuitive web interface that allows common tasks to manage software distribution to clients. 
+ * Management module consists of a simple and intuitive web interface that permits common tasks to manage software distribution to clients. 
 
 Overall, !OpenGnSys is a modular system that integrates a set of interrelated components and can be adapted to a variety of work settings possible. These components consist of standard services (file servers, web, database, DHCP, PXE, ...) and custom-developed tools for the project (cloning engine, console web, browser ad hoc, management demons repository and server, ...) which in combination offer everything !OpenGnSys system.
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 !OpenGnSys can lend support to some of the educational settings defined by the Working Group-Net Teaching RedIRIS.
-  * '''Classroom teaching:''' allowing the management and implementation of software installation on the computers of teachers, with ability to customize the settings according to user requirements.
-  * '''Classroom teaching ICT Classrooms:''' implementing methods independent support for PCs of students and teachers.
-  * '''Self-learning ICT Classrooms:''' methods of deployment computers for students, grouped according to the needs identified for each position or for each user profile.
+  * '''Classroom teaching:''' allowing the management and implementation of software installation in the computers of teachers, with possibility to customize the settings according to user requirements.
+  * '''Classroom teaching ICT Classrooms:''' implementing methods of independent support for PCs of students and teachers.
+  * '''Self-learning ICT Classrooms:''' methods of deploying computers for students, grouped according to the needs identified for each position or for each user profile.
 
 === Organizational Scenarios ===
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 == Origins ==
 
-!OpenGnSys born in May 2009 after the Working Groups RedIRIS held in Malaga as an effort to integrate several projects in development:
+!OpenGnSys was created in May 2009 after the Working Groups RedIRIS held in Malaga in an effort to integrate several projects in development:
 
  * Brutalix, University of Zaragoza